Updated after another day of marathon editing by Aimee:
Wow!
Talk about some great feedback!
Thanks to everyone’s input we already have an updated theme incorporating all that feedback.
Please feel free to reference the original (and of course the comments). I’m feeling pretty good about the current design. I think it needs a little more polish, like amplification of the navigation but otherwise it’s approaching Ideal. Then of course there’s the sub-pages and blog-theme (whew, it’s a good thing Aimee’s a friend of mine).
So without further ado, here’s the version incorporating all the feedback of the last couple days + some which didn’t make the blog, like my mom :).
Revised to include all commentary - Click Image for Full Size View
Please feel free to have a look at the originals from which this is derived.
Thanks again to everyone who gave input!
6 responses so far ↓
Please Help Redesign The Search Influence Web Site | Website Promotion is Not Voodoo // Dec 1, 2008 at 8:58 am
[...] We have incorporated all of the weekend’s input and put together a new version (by we I mean [...]
Andrew Shotland // Dec 1, 2008 at 10:35 am
Looks good Will. One grammatical note - change “If you won’t find…” to “If you can’t get…” or something like that.
Will Scott // Dec 1, 2008 at 7:10 pm
@Andrew, thanks brother. The copy is placeholder taken from our current fledgling site.
We’re definitely going to work on it more once we have the look down.
Perryn Olson // Dec 2, 2008 at 7:22 am
Looks really good. I like the combination of the other 3 samples. My only suggestion would be to have a picture of people. People add life to the site & make it more personable. Good job!
Roy // Dec 2, 2008 at 10:48 pm
There is no place on the ad that mentions kickbacks to me. Other than that, it looks good.
Bob Basu // Dec 3, 2008 at 9:17 pm
Looks great!
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